Dark Dock « Image & Verse Too

Dark Dock

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the lone light

hanging heavy
in the night dew
from the bow ring

searches its beam
fractured
‘cross the chop water
for the dark dock

for home

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~ by Image&VerseToo on July 7, 2008.

Perfect. What more can I say?

johemmant said this on July 7, 2008 at 3:44 am | Reply
I love the subtle internal rhymes, and for some reason the line “cross the chop water” really appeals to me.

twitches said this on July 7, 2008 at 5:31 am | Reply
I really like the title. You’ve captured a vivid image in the stark bright/dark contrast.

nathan1313 said this on July 7, 2008 at 9:35 am | Reply
…there is nothing so pleasurable as the dark dock lone light..

pieceofpie said this on July 7, 2008 at 1:19 pm | Reply
The dock light has a certain lonely poignancy. You have captured that essence!

Gemma said this on July 8, 2008 at 2:49 am | Reply
Bloody brilliant!

Steve said this on July 8, 2008 at 11:39 pm | Reply
Absolutely love your writing and art!

Petra Michelle said this on July 25, 2008 at 3:32 pm | Reply