Please!

 

Please!

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inquiries of heart

from summer red lover’s lips

float like butterflies

• • •

rob kistner © 2008

 

~ by Image&VerseToo on August 8, 2008.

Posted in haiku, image, love, poem

16 Responses to “Please!”

  1. This is a lovely haiku. Inquiry obviously equates to “ask”. This whole verse floats like a butterfly!

    Granny Smith said this on August 8, 2008 at 10:25 am | Reply

  2. Phyllis -

    Thank you for the kind words… ;)

    …Rob

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 8, 2008 at 10:37 am | Reply

  3. Yes. A wonderful Haiku indeed. Thank you.

    Brad said this on August 9, 2008 at 4:54 am | Reply

  4. Brad -

    Thank you… ;)

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 9, 2008 at 7:10 am | Reply

  5. What a completely fascinating and captivating image.

    AnnieElf said this on August 9, 2008 at 4:24 pm | Reply

  6. nice one Rob

    Rambler said this on August 10, 2008 at 7:09 am | Reply

  7. beautiful imagery in your post, and a perfect graphic to compliment it — very nice post!!!

    danni said this on August 10, 2008 at 8:31 am | Reply

  8. Wonderful, Rob. I love the image itself and the one you provoke in me in your words.

    patois said this on August 10, 2008 at 8:44 am | Reply

  9. AnnieElf -

    I’m pleased you were taken by this… ;)

    …Rob

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 10, 2008 at 9:36 am | Reply

  10. Rambler -

    Thank you!

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 10, 2008 at 9:36 am | Reply

  11. Danni -

    You are most gracious… ;)

    …Rob

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 10, 2008 at 9:37 am | Reply

  12. Patois -

    Thank you very much for your kind words… ;)

    …Rob

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 10, 2008 at 9:39 am | Reply

  13. This is very powerful, both the words and the image…you left many thoughts running through my mind- which is what I always hope for. Thank you!

    My SS is at
    http://bellamocha.wordpress.com/2008/08/11/sunday-scribblings-ask/

    bellamocha said this on August 10, 2008 at 7:14 pm | Reply

  14. Bellamocha -

    Thank you, and I am pleased this piece moved you… ;)

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 10, 2008 at 9:52 pm | Reply

  15. Takes your breath away.

    writetoday said this on August 11, 2008 at 12:54 pm | Reply

  16. Writetoday -

    Glad you were touched… ;)

    Image&VerseToo said this on August 11, 2008 at 3:57 pm | Reply

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