Harsh

 

Harsh

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though well and truly
foul of air
the white on black
treats eye’s behold

a cruel result
that one so fair
in nature’s plan
should stir such loath

…

rob kistner © 10/17/97

 


5 Responses to “Harsh”

  1. Interesting, Rob! Nicely done!

    Tumblewords said this on February 1, 2008 at 6:22 pm | Reply

  2. Enjoyed this verse as I am an expert at stirring loath.

    Myrtle Beached Whale said this on February 1, 2008 at 9:27 pm | Reply

  3. Ah, but it happens. Good verse.

    AnthonyNorth said this on February 2, 2008 at 7:00 am | Reply

  4. Beautiful verse, as usual. Concise yet vivid.

    Forgetfulone said this on February 3, 2008 at 1:03 am | Reply

  5. beautifully written rob…

    pieceofpie said this on February 5, 2008 at 4:11 pm | Reply

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