Stir of Love
Stir of Love
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He has kept it locked for so long. The horror of that night holds the seal tight. The memory riveted, securely barring any possible entry. None can pass. His bitter resolve makes certain none will try.
This is a dark and forbidden place – high-walled, cold and empty. Barren, unyielding, unable to support life… the wasteland of the lost, inhabited by the dead. The gate grown over by the tangle of grief and anger — there is but merciless memory of a once vital presence, of a living breath, of warmth, of joy… forever gone.
Brutal night has fallen long ago, that no sun can penetrate – and the blackness soothes him. He retreats into its depths, embraces its lightless void – hiding, sulking. Shielded from any possibility of further pain or remorse – unfeeling… lifeless.
And yet, a shadow now falls across the threshold. Someone approaches. A being, warm and alive – threatens to breach his hardened fortress.
This lovely, fragile creature can not possibly gain entrance. He will resist, he must! This is wrong, this is trespass! This is cruel betrayal of his lost beloved. He has no right to leave this place of sorrow and step into the light… no right!
But it now seems inevitable; his stronghold is succumbing to this delicate advance. He is vulnerable, and terrified, but it is useless to resist.
Searching with a patient heart, she has found it — the key. Grasped in her loving hand, fingers tenderly enfold it.
Gently, she slides it into the lock, turning with great care. He is defenseless. He feels his heart slowly open, and the long forgotten stir of love, begin to warm his soul.
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rob kistner © 2007
Searching with a patient heart, she has found it — the key. Grasp in her loving hand, fingers tenderly enfold it.
‘Gently, she slides it into the lock, turning with great care. He is defenseless. He feels his heart slowly open, and the long forgotten stir of love, begin to warm his soul.’
This brought a tear to my eye. A lovely piece of work.
jo said this on September 25, 2007 at 6:18 am |
I can so relate Rob. This is very tender and romantic.
Brian said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:25 am |
Jo –
Thank you for you kind words! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 9:27 am |
Brian –
Thank you! 😉
This piece is a bit autobiographical…
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 9:29 am |
Very very beautiful. Love can unlock anything.
gautami tripathy said this on September 25, 2007 at 10:18 am |
Hi Rob! I was so moved by the light, healing and transformation that love brings in this –the journey of being birthed back into life, after such darkness and despair. Wow. Deeply beautiful. I got lots of tears in my eyes.
🙂
Clare said this on September 25, 2007 at 11:54 am |
the long forgotten stir of love, begin to warm his soul.
nice. i like!
Ther said this on September 25, 2007 at 12:36 pm |
oh Rob, I couldn’t relate to this more, extremely well written, and by far the best I have read this time on the island.
I almost had something similar up some time back
Thanks for sharing
Rambler said this on September 25, 2007 at 12:58 pm |
How wonderful – a second chance for love. Beautifully-written, Rob!
Paris Parfait said this on September 25, 2007 at 2:33 pm |
Rob, what more can I say. This is a tender and loving poem. I can feel the warmth of love-found once again in your words. It reminds me of CS Lewis’ book, “Surprised By Joy”. I wish this poem for all of us here on your island. Wonderful!
love-Melanie-bd
Melanie-bd said this on September 25, 2007 at 3:08 pm |
How sweet! Surrender to love is a good thing…
Tumblewords said this on September 25, 2007 at 3:39 pm |
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm… sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing this piece, Rob. Wonderful!
Hedwyg said this on September 25, 2007 at 5:08 pm |
oh my word… through tears I have read your
words and wish I could express those feelings
as well as you do… I certainly know where
you’re coming from… sadly!
I hope it’s true and your wall was not so
impenetrable that you can love again…
ann said this on September 25, 2007 at 7:10 pm |
Gautami –
Thank you! 😉
…yes, love can set you free.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:40 pm |
Clare –
Thank you for your very kind words… 😉
Not all are fortunate enough to meet someone capable of the patient love required to bring someone back from bitterness.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:44 pm |
Ther –
Thank you! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:45 pm |
Rambler –
You are too gracious — thank you… 😉
I am humbled.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:48 pm |
Tara –
Thank you very much… 😉
Everyone is worthy of a second chance where love is concerned.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:49 pm |
Melanie –
How very gracious you are — thank you…
Please always think of Writers Island as ‘our’ island… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:52 pm |
Tumblewords –
Surrender is essential to love being present — but so very difficult… especially in the face of prior love lost.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:54 pm |
Hedwyg –
I genuinely appreciate your kind words… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 8:55 pm |
Ann –
You are gracious… 😉
Yes, I have been given the gift of a second chance at love — and it has grown deeper and more meaningful with each passing year… 20 in all so far, and many more to come.
imageverse2 said this on September 25, 2007 at 9:00 pm |
Rob, this is so beautiful… and you know these words, from the inside out. Thank you for sharing this treasure of courage and heart…
Lea said this on September 25, 2007 at 11:23 pm |
Lea –
Thank you… 😉
A truly wonderful writer once gave me a bit of advice, “write what you know” he said… it’s brilliant counsel.
imageverse2 said this on September 26, 2007 at 2:20 am |
hi rob,
what a touching story of love the second time around. thank you for sharing this. and thank you for bringing us all towards the writer’s island! 🙂
odessa said this on September 26, 2007 at 11:37 pm |
Odessa –
Thank you… 😉
…and you are most welcome. I am pleased the island has been embraced. We all now have an additional place to meet and share.
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 1:54 am |
Beautiful – what more can one say?
Redness said this on September 27, 2007 at 2:34 am |
Redness –
Thank you… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 2:41 am |
Hi Rob – I am up late trying to finish up reading all the entries this week. Still waiting for the muse to show up – taking your wise advice and just keeping the pen moving across the page no matter what nonsense ends up coming out!
You mentioned you write what you know – I am so happy that you have been blessed with love!
Kimberley said this on September 27, 2007 at 3:55 am |
Kimberley –
Thank you for your sentiments… 😉
I have regrettably fallen way behind reading the truly superb interpretations of the prompts being created by our fellow islanders. There’s some really great ‘stuff’.
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 4:05 am |
I hope to have this some day.
Rose
xo
Rose-Dewy Knickers said this on September 27, 2007 at 9:38 am |
That is beautiful, Rob. There are no wounds love and a little time can not heal. You continue to amaze and inspire me with your undaunted courage to lay your soul bare on paper.
Herb Urban said this on September 27, 2007 at 9:45 am |
Rose –
May all your wishes come true… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 9:46 am |
Herb –
Thank you!
This is an indelible memory of a very difficult time — now passed. I am blessed by the love of a wonderful woman and caring children! 😉
Once the heart is mended, and the soul is healed, the sharing gives meaning and purpose to the pain. It is my humanity reaching out in the hope I might shine a light for someone else caught in darkness.
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 9:58 am |
Perfect rendition of the situation, Rob…
spacedlaw said this on September 27, 2007 at 12:49 pm |
Spacedlaw –
Hello, and thank you… 😉
Nice to see you on the island!
imageverse2 said this on September 27, 2007 at 10:01 pm |
I finally made it: good thing it is an island and not a boat !
🙂
spacedlaw said this on September 28, 2007 at 6:02 am |
Oh Rob, this/you left me breathless…
what a beauty!
Jo(sie)
Jo(sie) said this on September 29, 2007 at 1:41 am |
Jo(sie) –
You are most gracious… thank you! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 29, 2007 at 2:13 am |