Fallen
Fallen
•
my footfalls
drum root chambers
of old growth
each step
cushioned
by centuries of needle-drop
in this ancient forest
my walking stick
smooth and warm
in my right hand
I’m caught up
in the rise and fall
twist and turn
of the trail
lost in the moment
when suddenly
my way is blocked
a great redwood
down
broken in repose
its tangled root
like a tentacled mouth
ripped raw
from the breast of mother earth
a giant
in a land of giants
you once soared
through the canopy
of this majestic forest
to thrust skyward
in your day
shallow rooted
I observe
but deep enough
to proudly stand
this thousand years
and yet
you’ve fallen
you did not fall unnoticed
yours
a thunderous final bow
now here
lifeless
while all around you
new life
sprouting
even from your fallen mass
in this lush calm
of nature’s vast cathedral
the eternal pulse of life
goes on
not unaware of your misfortune
but certainly
undaunted
…
rob kistner © 2007
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photorenderings edited by: rob kistner © 2007
top image entitled: “Almighty” | bottom image entitled: “Great Calm”
base images: Tom Casper, Joe Holms
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Gorgeous, gorgeous photos. Yes, yes I will come there and see this beauty!!
Karen said this on November 29, 2007 at 11:02 pm |
I so love these giants and feel that their passing is of such importance… for they are true guardians and sentinels of this earth… beautiful Rob. I am glad you were there to see its majesty even in its falling and for us to hear its thunderous release.
Lea said this on November 30, 2007 at 1:25 am |
When you said your foot was caught, I thought there would be a bear! I was completely hooked on this one rob! The pictures are just breathtaking!
Just Jen said this on November 30, 2007 at 10:21 am |
There is something so very powerful about those old forests… When a see a fallen giant I try to focus my thoughts on its new future as a nurturing nurse tree rather than on the end of its glory days. It doesn’t always help.
Robin said this on November 30, 2007 at 5:48 pm |
Wow, very descriptive and moving. A tree can be a wondrous creature as you described here.
lissa said this on November 30, 2007 at 10:35 pm |
They live their lives tall and majestic and when they do leave, they do so gracefully, tall and majestic. And their impact forever leaves a mark on nature and the human mind…love them. Loved the images too, the first one definitely spread an aura, how appropriate. Thank you.
UL said this on November 30, 2007 at 11:01 pm |
Karen –
…and you will moved!
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:01 am |
Lea –
They are magnificent… and so incredibly awe inspiring to stand, dwarfed in their presence. Being among them is, for me, a very rare moment of spiritual bliss — they truly move my soul.
You’re welcome… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:05 am |
JJ –
No bears! 😉
Glad this piece touched you!
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:07 am |
Robin –
I understand your reaching for the bright side. Unfortunately, when I see such magnificence fallen, I am overcome by genuine grief.
Some of the largest took root over 2,200 years ago — the time referred to as BC… not AD.
With pollution and global warming (yes, I believe Mr. Gore) — planet earth may never see the like of these wonders again. 😦
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:15 am |
Lissa –
Thank you…
The oldest living things on earth — as far as we know. Quite amazing! 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:17 am |
UL –
They are the true essence of majesty…
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:18 am |
beautiful……such emotion captured in the recognition of the strength and durability of a glorious tree….and the realization that it’s goodness still carries on despite it’s brokeness.
i was right there with you Rob. beautiful poetry, beautiful photos.
awareness said this on December 1, 2007 at 8:40 am |
“in this lush calm
of nature’s vast cathedral
the eternal pulse of life
goes on”
I echo that…
gautami said this on December 1, 2007 at 10:21 am |
they are lovely,, and right here in my own back yard… when i see them all i can think of is the damage they will do when one day they do fall and crush all that stands beneath them…
paisley said this on December 1, 2007 at 11:21 am |
Awareness –
Thank you… and thanks for joining me on my walk… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 12:03 pm |
Gautami –
We all play our part in the Great Mandala!
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 12:05 pm |
Paisley –
It’s fascinating to realize that when one giant falls, it opens a bit of the canopy, and from it’s fallen carcass, new redwood shoots emerge — one to eventually takes its place in the circle of life.
We need not fret the falling. Like the Swahili say, “hakuna matata!”
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 12:21 pm |
I love this poem…wonderful !
arboleda said this on December 1, 2007 at 1:48 pm |
I will always remember the giant redwoods from my visit to California when I was very young. It’s always sad to see the trees fall but if left there they can become such wonderful resources for other lifeforms to make a home, I was glad to read that aspect also in your poem
Crafty Green Poet said this on December 1, 2007 at 2:34 pm |
Arboleda –
Thank you very much — I’m pleased you enjoyed this… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 2:44 pm |
Juliet –
They are memorable for a lifetime. They posses such dignity, and they are an integral part of the big picture cycle of life on our planet. If they ever get into a serious struggle for survival, so too will the earth be.
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 2:47 pm |
Reminds me of the Zen Koan…If a Tree falls in the middle of the forest..does it make a sound? I’ve never visited an old growth forest….onthe list of things to do before I die. Nice poem-requiem for a fallen giant.
The Alchemist said this on December 1, 2007 at 3:09 pm |
Alchemist –
You should definitely see these wonders.
…and thank you!
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 4:12 pm |
Beautiful work, Rob, I could see it all so clearly.
jo said this on December 1, 2007 at 5:47 pm |
A black snake once did the same thing to me. The photo is out of this world!
colleen said this on December 1, 2007 at 6:40 pm |
Jo –
Thank you, you are kind… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 7:32 pm |
Colleen –
Watch those snakes… 😉
Thank you… Photoshop is quite a creative tool.
imageverse2 said this on December 1, 2007 at 7:34 pm |
Fallen but not unoticed. I love the idea, as many times Nature is so undervalued and taken for granted. Nobody values anything. It’s beautiful to just stop and notice.
Devil Mood said this on December 1, 2007 at 8:09 pm |
Incredbile images and powerful words. I especially loved:
its tangled root
like a tentacled mouth
ripped raw
from the breast of mother earth
Wow
Tickled Pink said this on December 1, 2007 at 8:37 pm |
My sister used to live out near the redwoods in far northern California. This reminded me of the time she took me to see them.
sister AE said this on December 2, 2007 at 12:30 am |
A wonderful walk through the forest. Peace, JP/deb
JanePoe (aka Deborah) said this on December 2, 2007 at 3:22 am |
The perfection of your poem lies not only in its words but in its shape: tall and straight just like a redwood!
Linda Jacobs said this on December 2, 2007 at 8:39 am |
Absolutely beautiful.. the poem and photos!! I think I may just have to get out in nature today, along with my camera. Thank you!
pavinganewroad said this on December 2, 2007 at 11:00 am |
I love it. Especially “ripped raw from the breast of mother earth.” Wonderful!
patois said this on December 2, 2007 at 12:23 pm |
Lovely and descriptive words to produce exquisite images! Great!
Tumblewords said this on December 2, 2007 at 2:21 pm |
Having been to the Redwood forests of California on numerous occasions, I love this work. You have perfectly captured the feeling of walking among those giants. I especially love Trees of Mystery on the northernmost coast of California. When I was up in Crescent City on business a few years ago, I drove up and was delighted to see Paul Bunyon standing at the entrance where he had been when we visited as children with our parents. I have black and white home movies of my father driving our Volkswagon bug through the tunnel burrowed into the base of a tree. Amazing feats of nature.
Bravo!
JHS said this on December 2, 2007 at 2:56 pm |
those trees are majestic. they empower the arts.
Skyelarke said this on December 2, 2007 at 5:06 pm |
I’m trying to imagine you writing your poems.
Do you sit calmly and quietly, or are you up pacing and speaking the words aloud?
Whatever you do the results are amazing.
Thanks for your lovely comment.
Frances
Frances said this on December 2, 2007 at 6:05 pm |
Beautiful photos, and excellent verse.
Diana said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:28 pm |
Devil Mood –
If we do not pay attention, and give care to the magnificent natural world that surrounds us, it will be gone before we realize it.
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:30 pm |
Sister AE –
I’m pleased this stirred a warm memory for you… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:32 pm |
Deborah (JP) –
I am glad you enjoyed it! 😉
Peace to you JanePoe…
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:34 pm |
Linda –
You are kind to also notice the small things… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:34 pm |
Pavinganewroad –
Thank you… and I’m very pleased if this encouraged to commune with our natural world! 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:36 pm |
Tickled Pink –
Thank you very much… you are most kind! 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:40 pm |
WOOOOOOW! These images are stunning. I have not been to see these giants in so long. This, and your words remind me I need to take my kids. Maybe this summer…
🙂
believingsoul said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:40 pm |
Patois –
Thank you very much! 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:48 pm |
JHS –
I’m pleased I was able to help you revisit that sense of awe… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:51 pm |
Skyelarke –
Yes they are, and yes they do… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:53 pm |
Tumblewords –
Thank you!
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 7:58 pm |
Frances –
I sit comfortably, but with emotions charged… and I do speak the words out loud as I go — especially as I do the final editing. I do so to capture their sound and tempo as much as their meaning — both are important to me.
I believe poetry is a spoken, as well as a written art form.
I have already recorded podcasts of myself reading some of my work. Eventually I will record podcasts of myself reading a significant number of my works. I like to create a music and effects bed for each, and mix that into the final recording.
And thank you for your gracious words… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 8:00 pm |
Diana –
You are most kind… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 8:02 pm |
Believingsoul –
What a perfect way to help your young ones acquire a genuine reverence for our natural world.
imageverse2 said this on December 2, 2007 at 8:05 pm |
Goodness, what more can be said?! Your photos are exquisite. I was just recently out in California and got to do some walking in the redwoods up in Sonoma County. Your words brought me back. I could feel them again.
June said this on December 2, 2007 at 10:50 pm |
I love your poem and your photos. Thanks for sharing
sage said this on December 2, 2007 at 10:54 pm |
Lovely evocation of areas I love.
Sarala said this on December 2, 2007 at 11:37 pm |
June –
I’m pleased I could evoke some fond memories for you… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 3, 2007 at 4:10 am |
Sage –
You’re welcome… that you!
imageverse2 said this on December 3, 2007 at 4:11 am |
Sarala –
A magical region on the planet…
imageverse2 said this on December 3, 2007 at 4:12 am |
beautiful.
jenica said this on December 7, 2007 at 2:27 am |
Jenica –
Thanks… 😉
imageverse2 said this on December 7, 2007 at 10:14 pm |