Rising
Rising
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like a despot crowned
you try to cut me down
to kneel in the mire
battered spirit
broken trust
with your power flexed
you want see me vexed
to cower in the shadows
wrapped in pity
racked with fear
you believe I’m meek
misread patience to mean weak
you see me as a coward
lacking courage
without heart
you’re certain I will fall
that you’ll be standing tall
you’ve loosed your prideful plan
cold and callous
full of spite
you’re confident you’ll win
so sure I will give in
surrender to a fate
of cruel defeat
devoid of hope
but I’ve been here before
I understand the score
I know how to counter
to stand firm
to hold my place
I am surviving still
you can never break my will
I am battle tested
I’m resilient
and surprising
your attack only brings
freshened winds ‘neath my wings
I will soar forever
you will lose
see here —
I’m rising
. . .
rob kistner © 2008
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Sailin’ the Wind
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summer
in our skyships
forever
sailin’ the wind
somewhere
sunday morning brings us
miles from earthbound
sailin’ the wind
september
keeping kite time
together
we summon the wind
swaying
to a gentle lady’s breeze
of ocean
sailin’ the wind
up among the clouds
I see my face miles below
tugging on the string
a travelin’ thing in my soul
I’ve got half a mind
to close my eyes
and let the string go
sailin’ the wind
children
bring your kite lines
to join us
and summon the wind
tomorrow
we’ll be watching a sad sea
and starbound
sailin’ the wind
tomorrow
we’ll be watching from on high
and rising
sailin’ the wind
watching
from our skyships
starbound together
sailin’ the wind
. . .
lottermoser, loggins & kistner © 1973/2008
(recorded by Loggins & Messina on their “Full Sail” album, 1973 – I added last two stanzas)
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collage at top of post is entitled “Always Rising” – by: rob kistner © 2008
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Good verse and fine ’empowering’.
Tumblewords said this on March 7, 2008 at 5:31 pm |
I could hear the music under this as I read….
pepektheassassin said this on March 7, 2008 at 7:40 pm |
Rob,
This piece is inspiring. The innate human spirit to rise, our will power to stand up each time we fall. It’s human nature, but it takes so much courage to say I will.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
jeques said this on March 7, 2008 at 8:28 pm |
Thank you for sharing, speaks in volumes,
Ammey
doyacreative said this on March 7, 2008 at 9:26 pm |
Wow! Very well done and powerful!
Mad Kane said this on March 7, 2008 at 11:03 pm |
I like the way you show that the oppression empowers the oppressed.
(and thanks for stopping by- obviously, I was afraid some would be offended!)
renpowell said this on March 8, 2008 at 8:10 am |
A strong will cannot be put down.
You put it well.
anthonynorth said this on March 8, 2008 at 11:02 am |
Love the image of September,”keeping kite time together”.
Just beautiful!
Gemma Wiseman said this on March 8, 2008 at 12:46 pm |
What a neat picture. 🙂 Good poem, I like the form you gave it, helps draw you and and keep you reading to the end. 🙂
Constance said this on March 8, 2008 at 6:40 pm |
wonderful collage… I like the idea of sailing in skyships
Crafty Green Poet said this on March 9, 2008 at 6:42 am |
Your words are powerful…and you are such an inspiring man. So glad you decided to keep our group together because we’re meeting more and more uplifting, empowering people.
Your collage is amazing! I like the visions that “skyships” make in my head. It takes me someplace far from this crazy world. Keep on keepin’ on!
Marie said this on March 9, 2008 at 1:16 pm |
great collage. i like both. very inpiring post.
get going
gautami said this on March 9, 2008 at 6:48 pm |
I liked the confidence in the words “you will lose”
Rambler said this on March 10, 2008 at 4:47 am |
two very uplifting and gracious poems… the emotion in the first poem gladed my heart.. the 2nd was inspiring… and the collage.. i think it was the escalators… very enlightnening post…
LittleWing said this on March 10, 2008 at 10:06 am |
Both gorgeous pieces…full of conviction and confidence.
UL said this on March 11, 2008 at 9:10 am |
Rob, your College is great. It’s beautiful. Reminds me of Harry Potter.{-(
I like the first poem the most. Maybe because of it’s dark undertones and power. Your second poem made me fill like a child again. Carefree. Excellent work.
-bd
Beloved Dreamer said this on March 13, 2008 at 8:41 am |