Dark Dock


Dark Dock

the lone light

hanging heavy
in the night dew
from the bow ring

searches its beam
‘cross the chop water
for the dark dock

for home

• • •

rob kistner © 2008



~ by Image&VerseToo on July 7, 2008.

7 Responses to “Dark Dock”

  1. Perfect. What more can I say?

  2. I love the subtle internal rhymes, and for some reason the line “cross the chop water” really appeals to me.

  3. I really like the title. You’ve captured a vivid image in the stark bright/dark contrast.

  4. …there is nothing so pleasurable as the dark dock lone light..

  5. The dock light has a certain lonely poignancy. You have captured that essence!

  6. Bloody brilliant!

  7. Absolutely love your writing and art!

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