Please!

 

Please!

inquiries of heart

from summer red lover’s lips

float like butterflies

• • •

rob kistner © 2008

 

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~ by Image&VerseToo on August 8, 2008.

16 Responses to “Please!”

  1. This is a lovely haiku. Inquiry obviously equates to “ask”. This whole verse floats like a butterfly!

  2. Phyllis –

    Thank you for the kind words… 😉

    …Rob

  3. Yes. A wonderful Haiku indeed. Thank you.

  4. Brad –

    Thank you… 😉

  5. What a completely fascinating and captivating image.

  6. nice one Rob

  7. beautiful imagery in your post, and a perfect graphic to compliment it — very nice post!!!

  8. Wonderful, Rob. I love the image itself and the one you provoke in me in your words.

  9. AnnieElf –

    I’m pleased you were taken by this… 😉

    …Rob

  10. Rambler –

    Thank you!

  11. Danni –

    You are most gracious… 😉

    …Rob

  12. Patois –

    Thank you very much for your kind words… 😉

    …Rob

  13. This is very powerful, both the words and the image…you left many thoughts running through my mind- which is what I always hope for. Thank you!

    My SS is at
    http://bellamocha.wordpress.com/2008/08/11/sunday-scribblings-ask/

  14. Bellamocha –

    Thank you, and I am pleased this piece moved you… 😉

  15. Takes your breath away.

  16. Writetoday –

    Glad you were touched… 😉

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