Thorns
This is a haiku celebrating enduring friendship.
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Thorns
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a ruby droplet
the yellow rose bears sharp thorns
we will still share wine
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rob kistner © 2007
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This is a haiku celebrating enduring friendship.
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Thorns
•
a ruby droplet
the yellow rose bears sharp thorns
we will still share wine
…
rob kistner © 2007
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~ by Image&VerseToo on November 14, 2007.
Roy: “I've...seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion. I watched C-Beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhäuser Gate. All those moments will be lost...in time. Like tears... In the rain.”
Deckard: "I don't know why he saved my life. Maybe in those last moments he loved life more than he ever had before. Not just his life... anybody's life... my life. All he'd wanted was the same answers the rest of us want. Where do I come from? Where am I going? How long have I got? All I could do was sit there and watch him die."
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Nice! A few words of friends and life!
Tumblewords said this on November 14, 2007 at 3:19 pm |
This is lovely. Sweet and sharp and good going down.
Brian said this on November 14, 2007 at 4:18 pm |
Tumblewords –
Thanks!
Just a simple ditty, playing off the fact that the yellow rose is a symbol of friendship. Also, the double meaning of the ‘ruby droplet’ as a being a drop of blood, which is occasionally drawn by the ‘thorns’ of friendship — and a drop of red wine, as a symbol of the blood of life, in this case, of the life of the friendship. 😉
imageverse2 said this on November 14, 2007 at 6:08 pm |
Brian –
Thank you… 😉
I’m pleased it was satisfying!
imageverse2 said this on November 14, 2007 at 6:09 pm |
Wonderful Haiku, ‘through thick and thin, stay and endure, like petals, like thorns’ is the message I recieved, beautiful, thank you. 😀
UL said this on November 15, 2007 at 1:25 pm |
UL –
Excellent interpretation! Certainly right to the ‘spirit’ of my piece.
If we get hurt
remember friendship has painful moments
but we will remain friends
…is another interpretation.
imageverse2 said this on November 16, 2007 at 11:14 am |