Faithful (a haiku)

 

 

Faithful

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time is a tyrant
it will chill the spring blue jay
yet still I am true

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rob kistner © 2008

 

~ by Image&VerseToo on May 9, 2008.

8 Responses to “Faithful (a haiku)”

  1. Good one!

    I simply can’t think of writing a haiku :(

    Veens said this on May 9, 2008 at 6:08 am

  2. I’ve never had much luck with haiku but you make it look so easy. A beautiful poem!

    Jane Doe said this on May 10, 2008 at 4:57 am

  3. the first line is really great! its powerful.
    lovely ‘ku

    totomai said this on May 10, 2008 at 6:20 am

  4. oh lovely

    Rambler said this on May 11, 2008 at 3:32 am

  5. thanks for your faithfulness

    Moe Lauher said this on May 11, 2008 at 1:46 pm

  6. Ah yes the magic of words

    Steve said this on May 11, 2008 at 10:57 pm

  7. How often I have been chilled by time’s tyranny. Very apt. Love the little blue jay. Awww.

    Selma said this on May 14, 2008 at 5:34 am

  8. Rob,

    I always love the haiku form. With this piece you made me love it more. Thank you for this post. It reminds me and inspires me to write haiku again. It’s been a long while since I wrote a haiku piece.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

    jeques said this on May 14, 2008 at 8:45 pm

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