The Gift
This first piece is a perspective on the gift of love.
Selfless
•
unworthy fool am I
to ignore it
to abuse it
to mistreat it
to misuse it
to mishandle it at every turn
no way do I deserve
yet
over and over
you lay it at my feet
to protect them
from life’s harsh road
time after time
you wrap it round me
as shelter
from sorrow’s storm
again and again
it nurtures and sustains me
on my journey through
the wastelands of the lonely
this light
this precious treasure
no way do I deserve
but forever will I cherish
your soul gift
of selfless love
…
rob kistner © 2007
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This second piece is a reflection on the hard-won gift of wisdom.
Elders
•
reason’s blaze
burned brightly
now spent
insight’s tinder vanquished
left ashen
no threat to incandesce
your flame of logic
once stark against the dark
of ignorance and
narrow vision
flared radiant
sparking inquiry
bold beacon
a seeker’s torch
your enlightened fire
too soon a pyre
reduced now to ember
but warming those
who draw near
and stir
your smoldering wisdom
…
rob kistner © 2007
My thoughts exactly!
Steve said this on September 18, 2007 at 5:43 am |
Steve –
Excellent!
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 5:49 am |
hmm, I too wrote the same subject.. but I like yours a lot. 🙂
joezul said this on September 18, 2007 at 1:56 am |
I especially like your poem ‘Selfless’. The beautiful imagery of precious love you have transferred to the reader all too successfully. Wonderful.
Beaman said this on September 18, 2007 at 3:42 am |
Your words are always so full of beautiful thoughts. I like both the pieces.
gautami said this on September 18, 2007 at 7:59 am |
Both are superb and leave the reader with a lot to think about. From the second I love:
your flame of logic
once stark against the dark
of ignorance and
narrow vision
And from the first: as shelter
from sorrow’s storm
Wonderful poetry.
Jo said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:03 am |
Both of these gifts are often unappreciated until we feel them slipping away. How much richer to cherish them in their prime.
Robin said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:41 am |
Joezul –
Thank you!
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:50 am |
Beaman –
I appreciate your kind words!
Nice to see you visit again… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:52 am |
Gautami –
You are always gracious… 😉
Thank you!
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:53 am |
Jo –
I am glad there was resonance for you in the pieces… 😉
Thank you for your kind words!
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:54 am |
Robin –
How incredibly true, and oh so often overlooked. 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:55 am |
Beautiful words that reveal such sensitivity and heart, a gift for us to sink into, these words of love and wisdom… Thank you Rob!
Lea said this on September 18, 2007 at 11:15 am |
“insights tinder vanquished”
lovely as always
Lucy.R.E. said this on September 18, 2007 at 12:34 pm |
Brilliant, both! The first one is a familiar story and might have been written by someone I know. The second is a too-familiar story about people who speak out and make a difference being silenced too young – yet inspiring others to take up their fight. These poems are wonderful and I will save them for thought.
Paris Parfait said this on September 18, 2007 at 12:35 pm |
Ah. Wonderful! Each of them is a gift for readers…
Tumblewords said this on September 18, 2007 at 1:38 pm |
Lea –
You are kind… thank you! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 2:47 pm |
Lucy.R.E. –
Thank you! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 2:53 pm |
Tara –
Thank you — you humble me.
I am very pleased they touched a chord in you… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 2:56 pm |
Tumblewords –
You are most gracious… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 18, 2007 at 2:56 pm |
Grreat! You could have written the first one for me!
keith hillman said this on September 18, 2007 at 3:01 pm |
Hi Rob.
My first response to your beautiful poem on love is that feeling of the act of giving love a bit awkward……as it always is when one is expressing their vulnerability openly.
Beautiful poetry as always…….I love reading your lyrics. They are gifts all on their own.
awareness said this on September 18, 2007 at 8:29 pm |
Brill. But my fave was on Love. The first.
You know, it is all there is.
xo
Blue
Gillian @ Indigo Blue said this on September 18, 2007 at 9:12 pm |
Both amazing pieces – Myheart lent itself to the first one more closely for some reason. Perhaps because I understand love better than wisdom? It made me wonder?
Michelle said this on September 18, 2007 at 9:50 pm |
Both wonderful pieces but liked the first the best – it’s so graceful. Love really is the best gift, all the more if it turns out to be unconditional!
Lisa said this on September 19, 2007 at 12:27 am |
Love and wisdom – what great gifts!
tinkerart said this on September 19, 2007 at 1:43 am |
Keith –
Thanks — glad you could relate!
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:17 am |
Awareness –
You are most kind… 😉
I am very pleased you are touched by my writing. It is, for me, a pouring out of my soul, and a freeing of my spirit… it is how I survive in the world.
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:24 am |
Blue –
Two brilliantly gifted poet-troubadours once wrote: “All you need is love…”
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:29 am |
Michelle –
Thank you for your kind words… 😉
The first peace is fueled by great passion — the second arises from understanding.
The first speaks to the heart, the second, to the soul.
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:32 am |
Lisa –
Love is the one gift we can never deserve… it is fate brings it our way, to embrace and nurture — lest we lose it.
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:35 am |
Tinker –
Love and wisdom make for a world of peace and understanding… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:36 am |
Love the word choices in the second poem. They are all very strong and paint a vivid picture.
Sara said this on September 19, 2007 at 10:51 am |
Hi Rob! Both poems are very refined. Selfless love and wisdom are delicate topics for poetry and I liked how you described them both. Listening to older people gives me pleasure. I always remind myself that they have an entire life of baggage to share.
Gilson said this on September 19, 2007 at 10:53 am |
Sara –
Thank you very much! I’m pleased the poem resonated for you… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 10:57 am |
Gilson –
I appreciate your kind words!
I prefer to think that we elders have an entire life of “useful experience” to share, in spite of the baggage… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 11:00 am |
I loved the poem on elders a lot, always the best gift, gift of wisdom
Rambler said this on September 19, 2007 at 2:06 pm |
Rambler –
Thank you!
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 2:13 pm |
Hi Rob! I LOVE the two takes you did on the prompt. “Selfless” really evokes such a warmth and safe feeling, and I love the line “on my journey through/ the wastelands of the lonely.” In “Elders” I love the poignancy and that there are people who do recognize the wisdom in those smoldering embers. The elders have so much to share and teach. Great job, Rob!
🙂
Clare said this on September 19, 2007 at 3:13 pm |
Clare –
Thank you… you are most kind! 😉
I have always been fascinated by the essence and nuance of both love and wisdom — whether I understand either is another question. But I have seen both moving, alive in the world, and know they exist.
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 3:37 pm |
Love and wisdom … both such great gifts … thank you
Fenny said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:33 pm |
To stir you smoldering wisdom! Oh I like that line. Wisdom is so hard for us to just accept and usually I have to bash my head into a brick wall, before I become the least bit wise! Sigh!
Mary Timme said this on September 19, 2007 at 4:57 pm |
Fenny –
You are most welcome… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 6:19 pm |
Mary –
Glad that line resonated with you — it really felt right when that closing line came to me.
Wisdom only can be achieved through concussion! 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 19, 2007 at 6:22 pm |
I was having a drink at a bar recently and a member of the waitstaff was telling me about a problem they were having with a friend.
SO I gave this young man the benefit of my nearly 46 years on the planet.
You are so wise he said with all the sincerity a 24 year old can muster.
I told him wisdom comes from having made a lot of mistakes!
Love both poems – as usual.
Sending good vibes your way
Frances said this on September 20, 2007 at 12:43 pm |
Frances –
It’s in the face of mistakes that we are given the opportunity to confront and recognize our imperfections, our fallibility, our humanity – and it’s embracing this, rising above, and moving forward that affords us a better insight into ourselves… this is the seed of wisdom.
Thank you for your kind words… 😉
imageverse2 said this on September 21, 2007 at 1:45 am |